Thursday, November 6, 2008

hanung siwiyanti (late submission)

My friend told me about her experience on the bus. She met a group of thief on the bus when she want to go home from Jogja. She didn't realize that there were thief on the bus. her wallet was taken by a thief. When she got out from the bus, she realized that her wallet had gone. She turned up on the bus again and she took her wallet back from the thief. She worried because there were 6 thief and she was a women. Now, she usually meet the group of thief on the bus. Although, she takes an another bus. She would meet that group again. One way that she can avoid the bus where the group of thief in action.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

My friend told me about her experience WHEN SHE WAS IN A bus to home from Jogja. She met a group of thief IN the bus. FIRST, She didn't realize that they were thieves. a thief TOOK her wallet OUT. When she got out from the bus, she realized that her wallet had gone. SOON, She REturned TO the bus again and CHASED the thief TO GET HER WALLET. She WAS worried because there were 6 thieVES and she was aLONE. (Now, she usually meet the group of thief on the bus.) Although, she (takes) TOOK (an) another bus. She would meet that group again. One way that she can avoid the bus where the group of thief in action(???)


Sorry i just want to correct some mistakes there. Overall performance is good, keep up the good work.